Thanks :3

Nyehehehe >:3

Thats what i have rn. I may write more later today or tonight.

"in what way?" i ask again. "he took my shirt off when i was unconscious..." she mumbles. "oh" i say

We're in the kitchen. edd still hasn't cleaned uo the glass."so what is it?" i ask her. "um, Tom's kinda...sexually attracted to me.." shes replies.

Lolis slowly coming downstairs. "Are you ok?" I ask. "i want to speak with you.." she says. "ok" i reply.

Thanks, it gets a bit sinful though..

Chapter 6: (cruffles perspective) We're in the lounge watching tv. I cant stop looking at Edd, he's so cute. Frick, he's staring at me. What do i do?!? "Uhh" says Edds nervously. "S-sorry" i studder

Child Loli: Yeah!

Ok.

Ehh.. its probably the shortest chapter

Child Loli: No, but i imagine my mom is...

Thats it

"well dont treat Loli likr she should be" I walk upstairs to my room. I lay her on my bed, hr long pink hair speads apart of the sheets. Shes beautiful.

"So, i see you searched land and sea to find your princess" he says sarcastically. "come on, Tord" i groan "would you like it if you were in the rain and i left you out there?" "no.." he says gloomy.

Once open the door, Matt come rushing up to me. I guess he noticed we were gone. When i finally get past him, i see Tord in front of me.

Shes sleeping on a street bench. I run over to her. I caress her cheak. Shes as cold as a block of ice. I pick her up and carry her home.

Chapter 4: (still Toms perspective) I'm runnig outside, trying to find loli. I'm really worried about her. I dont want her to catch a cold. I'm getting kinda lost. After s few minutes of blindlessly walking around, i find her. Shes sleeping on a street be

Ok, i tell you the part before the wierd chapter

Child Loli: Yeah?