I think this is really good! And I like how sans is drawn in this!

Mellisa: thats amazing! -smiles for the, "First time in forever!"- I cant wait to see you, wait what is your unfinished business?

-hugs Mikey- yassssss you are my best friend!!! :3

Mellisa: -starts to cry- P-Peter! -runs and tries to hug him- I though y-you w-were.....

P-Peter, what h-happened?...-hugs peter- a-also here i-is a d-donut.....-gives donut-

-hugs Mikey- h-hey...-smiles-

Mellisa: -is scared- w-who i-is that?...-looks around franticly-

Ok I get it, its ok Vixey Im a f*cking b*tch, I shouldn't be forgiving Its ok....Im a F*cking idiot, a piece of sh*t....

-hugs back- thank you, Tato its ok I feel the Same and Grey, I love you, you are amazing but me, I am the b*tch..

*he sadly died, and she has been sad for the time he has been gone. (also ignore the things on the clothes and hair the are weird...)

I'm so f*cking sorry Vixey, I'm a f*cking b*tch, please forgive me, I'm so sorry, so very sorry....

Sour: I know how to fight...-kicks E. Peters legs to make him fall and he does- I just...-sighs-....they say a word to remind me of something then, I'm weak....

Can I be one? And remember when I drew myself. For you? Can you use that for this?

Ok I will!

Sour: -looks at him- I-I....-looks at arms-...c-cut..my eye a-and n-neck was w-when I stood up t-to a person b-bullying Lucy....-frowns-You probably hate me for it...

Sour: -pulls up sleeves and hides face-...n-nothing....

I have glasses so yay! -hugs Lost-

Yeah I will

Where should we start?

Eh...I don't know, maybe E. Peter and sour?...or do you have another idea...