AAH WE ALL LIVE IN THE SAME TIME ZONEEEE. and I wish I could scream, but my brothers room is next to me, and across the hall are 2 sisters and my parents, and downstairs are my aunt and baby cousin ;-;
This is really good, and sad. But I hate to be THAT PERSON, but you forgot the lyric "You'll never know dear, how much I love you". It comes in between the two main lines you used.