I suppose bangs wouldnt be that bad because this type of messy bangs just reminds me of every anime mc and is boring even though it looks comfortable to me
I only like the outfit but unsure about the hair and face... o was gonna give him the famous tensing kaiwai haircut where they just have super straight bangs and pigtails but idk I like to draw messy hair and I like when hair is in face otherwise it looks plain and exposed to me