Sorry about how I write stuff /w\ I'm bad when it comes to that

She was a bait dog for dog fights. When I found her, she was bleeding badly and was just left there. I picked her up and took her home so I can aid her wounds. She’s a Doberman who has a overbite and is half blind. She helps me with my depression and she helps me kill sometimes. She’s actually a really sweet dog.

There

The original sounds wrong because it’s just one big sentence and the end of it sounds really bad.

You need to learn how to write, how to use punctuation, and spell correctly.

I hope I helped you write better and such.

dude wtf flame

ahshsh

Allow me to rewrite it, the correct way of course.