MochiRushmoom

Art Critique - MochiRushmoom

They say that you are your own worst critic and I am living proof of that ٩(•̤̀ᵕ•̤́๑)

Going through your page, I notice that your backgrounds tend to change a lot. While this in itself is not a major issue, I see that there are quite a few backgrounds that have a lot of effort put into them. I think that you could try drawing that kind of background more as they are eye catching and add to your art, give that your art style is complicated and has quite a bit of detail. Another thing I notice is that you don’t animate too often. At the beginning of your profile, you animated quite a bit but now, you only make still images. I’d try to animate a bit more even though it’s difficult and can be time consuming. I also noticed that you tend to draw your own persona and OCs quite a bit. This isn’t really a bad thing, but I feel like you could have a bit more variety in who or what you draw. Playing around with poses and positioning would help as you tend to draw characters flat dab in the middle of the screen with the same size in most of your posts. I feel you have potential, yet are afraid of stepping out of your comfort zone, despite telling others to do so. Overall, your art is, for the most part, pretty okay, but you do have potential to improve.
Overall Score: 5/10

I think I’m pretty hard on myself, but it’s not always a bad thing ^^ If you have any other tips for me, I’d appreciate hearing them 💗

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  Sonic_Emerald6

Love your drawing u have raw talent

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  ~{Dabi}~

I posted it🤩

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  ~{Dabi}~

Thx🙃

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  MochiRushmoom

Of course you can ^^

4 years ago   Reply
  ~{Dabi}~

Can I draw you or attempt xD

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