Good: you did all the right colors (except for the background, it's supposed to be the same color as the inside hair, but it's ok) You only did my top half, like I do. You did the white eyes. You did the scar. There are many more good things about this, but I may not have time to write them or think of them.
Bad: The background color isn't right. My hair is swiped the wrong way. The scar is supposed to be on the other side. My mouth isn't there but that's not a big deal. Don't take offense to this, just some things to remember for next time.