personally i think the colors r fine since they give off an aesthetic and color palette that can be easily recognizable!!! yes those colors arent easy on the eyes but some people use it for an aesthetic

I'm going to agree with chain link try experimenting with styles, linearts, colors whatever. Try to step out of your comfort zone ❤️ but I don't have much criticism because as I've said before your art is godly

Shhh, I love your art!

But here are a few things of ya want

Try shading?

I know, it’s common
You could experiment with styles, cloths, expand if you will

But I love your art, it’s perfect!

Xoxo- simplord

how am i supposed to give god criticism