My book not selling yet: shadow vampire Varjack (I created by myself btw) (it has 20 chapters)

Chapter one the adventure:
Varjack was a young boy until darkness evil infected him ripping his flesh turning him into a shadow A vampire bit him and he is now a vampire shadow. He pretended to be on the evil team but he was nice. When he was an adult he learned to fight properly he is now eighteen. “Hello stranger”Varjack said “you look a bit odd anyway hello we took you here for a reasonjust believe me you ha-,, “I know” Varjack interrupted “oh anyway what’s your name”said the stranger “Varjack” varjack said “vanjark?” Said the stranger “no Varjack!” snapped Varjack “oh my bad Varjack anyway I am Gavin” varjack layed down “You are in a wooden hut for protection because I found you dead on the mountain but your awake now” said Gavin Varjack swiftly got up and sat in the corner of the room. “ excuse me” snapped varjack “I am was on the mountains?! Oh well” Gavin told varjack about himself and varjack told Gavin about himself too. “I’m leaving” said varjack politely “fine” sighed Gavin varjack left he travelled through the dark forests and dirty swamps to get to the mountains but then he saw a entrance with 2 guards next to the door Varjack ran over to the door “hello odd human” said one guard “I am a vampire” snapped varjack “hey!” Said the guards “be nice anyway were you invited here” “what no” said varjack “GET OUT THEN” shouted one guard “woah what’s the big deal” varjack said softly “THE KING MUST NOT BE HARMED he is IMPORTANT and if he didn’t invite you there is a possible chance you might be a criminal” said the guard angrily varjack sucked the guards blood a little bit “ AAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH FUCK” said the guard “go in if you want GOD” said the guard in pain he was heavy breathing on the floor “OH NO ARE YOU OK” said the other guard the other guard doesn’t reply varjack went in “ WHAT ARE YOU HERE FOR” shouted the king “I DIDNT INVITE YOU” the kings face went instantly red “FOR YOU” varjack yelled varjack sucked everyone’s blood and he stole the first ember of the 12 it lit up and showed a water simble and It was blue it clipped to his jacket by itself And the god slate appeared and clipped to his jacket too and the ember placed itself in one of the holes in the slate and the line lit up to the middle and varjack just continued his adventure he went to a town and everyone said “ YOU HAVE THE GOD SLATE OH MY GOD WE SHOULD PRAY TO YOU” but varjack just went into a inn and stayed there the inn was called nulzzrepp inn and the town was called spring valley varjack was also king of wolverine city he will never die too because he has a special power not to die from sun and age.

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