Well, thank you, i appreciate the in-detail criticism. I'll do better next time

I like the foreshortening a lot!
The drawing is definitely a little messy, but there are a lot of good and fun elements in it, such as the pose, the foreshortening, the flow and movement- just cause it doesn't have crisp lineart doesn't make it bad at all

Uhh ok, thanks i guess

I disagree