I’m writing a story and yes the cow is important

* ~ Visiting You ~ •

Prologue- He quickly went up the rope ladder. Denizy saw a cape. The capes colors were dark brown, dark red, many other dark colors. The person wearing the cape started to untie their hair, showing off long beautiful brown hair.

Chapter 1-The rain was falling and with every little drip Denizy felt deep dread. Something was going to happen, and it was going to be bad. He had to find out. He walked over to his farm and looked at all of the animals, the cows seemed like they haven’t been fed. Denizy went through is chest looking for wheat. He entered the pin and sat on a bench and threw some wheat. He sang their favorite songs, taught them tricks. Soon enough it was time to put them under a roof. The cows started to whine about the rain. Denizy walked out of the pin, feeling satisfied. As he started to put the wheat away the noticed a book with the words saying ‘If you’re reading this you should know who you are. If you’re not whom I’m talking about GET OUT. I need you to come to me. I’ll text you my coordinates.’ Denizy already knew they were talking about, it was no other than him. As if someone was stalking he got a message and someone was sharing their location with him. He stared in the direction where they were. That path was leading to Waterton. Denizy dreaded that place. But he knew this was what was wrong with today. After two hours of walking and eating Denizy came across a prison.

Chapter 2-Denizy’s phone got a notification. It was a text message from the same number ‘Go inside I’ll be waiting’. Confused Denizy walking in to be greeted with a man in a beautiful dark blue suit and tie. ‘Hello sir who will to be visiting tonight?’ Once more, Denizy’s phone said ‘Marbler Poled, thats who you’re looking for.’ Regretting what he had done he said ‘Marbler Poled, sir. The man cocked his head in concern, ‘Do you know the man?’ The man almost seemed worried. ‘I met him when I was younger, I guess this is a met up’ Denizy said quickly, starting to sweat. ‘Alright.. Here’s a ticket. Give this to the man right next to the last turn’ he started to say in his mocking voice ‘He’ll say “Card, please. If no card then you’ll be kicked out as soon as possible.”’ The man was obviously very proud with himself. Denizy nodded, took the card and proceeded to walk into what felt like an endless labyrinth. Finally he saw a man and walked up to him. The man said ‘Card, please. If no card then you’ll be kicked out as soon as possible.’ Denizy was in the right place, but at the wrong time. Just as he was giving the man the card an alarm went off repeating ‘Prisoner is in an attempt to escape, lock all doors and chambers’ The man stared at Denizy and said check at all of the prison rooms, alert me when someone seems to be missing, I’m Clark Unger. Denizy nodded and ran quickly through each and every room. As he stumbled upon the last room above said ‘Marbler Poled’ nobody seemed to be there. Denizy had heard a noise ‘Hey, Denizy, help a man out and dig me this hole’ In horror Denizy turned to see a hole almost the size of him, an arm holding a shovel in the hole. It was Marbler. ‘Go to the roof and stop her’ Denizy was confused, who was her, did he need to stop him, is this to get him away? ‘Go now, there isn’t much time’ Denizy nodded and ran to a door that said exit. He saw a rope. He quickly went up the rope ladder. Denizy saw a cape. The capes colors were dark brown, dark red, many other dark colors. The person wearing the cape started to untie their hair, showing off long beautiful brown hair. They’d had proceeded to take off the cape. Denizy ran towards the woman. ‘Hello?!’ He started to yell. The woman turned, ‘You shouldn’t be here in the rain, let alone on the rooftop.’ ‘Uhm- well- someone told me to-‘ he began to say what Marbler had told him but stopped, he shouldn’t do that. He’ll be pushed away. ‘Told you what.’ She started to sound a little angry. ‘That the view was beautiful here, including in the rain’ He said with a promising smile, he had never lied so much in one day. ‘Well, they were lying. Anywho, my name is Elver Poler, I have a husband here. He’s grown insane and sometimes doesn’t even know me. Like he wants to murderer me. I decided I should end all of this sooner or later.’ She sounded sad, Denizy could relate to Elver though. ‘You don’t need to’ he said worried, strong winds started blowing. ‘Oh, I guess its time.’ Elver picked up the cape and did a transition when the cape hit the floor she was gone. Denizy ran and grabbed her arm. Elver looked up at him tears falling ‘Why.. You’re going to fall too, don’t save me.’ ‘I have to..’ Denizy tried to pull her up, but he couldn’t. Elver rock climbed her way to the top, as she was almost there, there wasn’t much weight to hold Denizy down and he started to fall off the roof. Right as he fell Elver got up, she stared, shocked. As Denizy was falling he found an uneven brick, it was sticking out. He reached his hand to grab the brick.

Chapter 3
(Let your mind go here)

  trashcat .

nobody is gona read that…. that’s a lot of words

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