Rate my poems I guess....

Taken from my bio.
I made these on my break...
⚠️They’re pretty cheesy⚠️

She saw me as a brother - 💔
So I went for her mother - ❤️‍🩹

I did so much to get your attention,
I couldn't resist loving you-
but loving you wasn't the intention,
but I did once I saw the imperfection...

I'm sorry if I made you cry,
I couldn't look you in the eye-
No more love to supply,
though, my love was dry...

I tried making people laugh
You knew me for my other half
It was all just a mask
I'm grateful that people would never ask

I hope you found someone new
I made both of us suffer
But now, you can smile
You look tougher 💪❤️‍🩹

Lungs filllin' with cloud,
father never proud,
mom couldn't be around
I fell so hard, I hit the ground...
my throat fillin' with beer,
now I begin to fear
forget it, "cheers!"
My worries start to disappear
When I make my art
I don't make it from the heart
"you're art is awesome!"
I say that often,
does it sound meaningless...?
is there a way of redeeming 𝙐𝙎?
Do I sound annoying?
my art is shit, you ain't enjoying.

when I'm around my parents
they hate my presence
they told me "Don't you dare lie"
I lied to em saying "I don't wanna die"
they don't care
I was already aware...
I try making friends
our relationship quickly ends
quick to leave
I always deceive
there's always pain to relieve,
always pain that I achieve,
for the work I put in?
what's the point?
I always sin
Father, I'm sorry to disappoint
My poems are as fucked as my head
and for all the times I bled
It wasn't enough, it should've been more
cause, my body not moving, on the floor
is something she'd adore
instead of me walking out the door.

Sometimes, you wanna cry,
sometimes, you wanna die,
and when your family asks 'what's up'-
you have to lie
they use you, take advantage of you
and when you leave for good
they'll be sad
and regret the good moments they've had
and all the thoughts that run through my head
the more i think what would happen when I'm dead

She was a keeper
Though, my jealous friends told me:
"You have to leave her"
I was so stupid to listen...

I've been thinking of ending it,
mama wanna talk bout it while we sit,
she don't really know how I feel
i don't know how to heal

They had jealousy,
they had envy,
but they never knew the truth about me,
all my agony
i was a fiend
hard to believe
that's the truth you see,
i never felt love inside of me

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