Ok

srry I'll check tommorow... I need sleep :)
(I would tell you how to draw an anime face eye, nose, mouth, and clothes :))

yup :)

Ok I'll try that now!

firstly, you have to fix your drawing style :)
but you can do it later XD
delete the sun and add some clouds! also, give the character a nose :)
and, change the hairstyle a bit. Lat, there is a thin line in the clothes brlow the neck :)
if you finish these tasks, it would be better!!