This was a quite lazy drawing tho

I know, I've been slowly improving, I'm trying to fix all those things

I think you should improve the anatomy more . Such as the head and body proportions. The eyes are also too close and the drawing overall looks flat . The only thing that has tone is the head. Yet again, the square shaped head overtakes the supposed depth . The chin is also pushed in and seems as if the right side of the character’s head is cut off to form a square

YAS!

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