tips: i recommend making a reference if your a newbie and try to do anatomy it helps you a lot and yeah but the one i am really bothered is the clothes because it looks like it’s floating without the wrinkles and stuff and try to make a sketch first before making the whole process.

Try anatomy references.
You didn't draw a sketch before drawing the finale... I suggest you do it if you're not doing simple drawings

7/10, I believe you can do it!
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Eem my oc I always use

Who is your oc?

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