Your drawings are great bro. Just a little adjustments and attention to detail certainly would help.

It's hard to draw on here when I'm most used to traditional, sorry it's not good enough for you

It just looks like the neck and head placement on the body is out of place. Atleast to me.

Is there somthing wrong with them?. If you got a problem come on and js say it dude 💀💀

Morning !