luka 🍉

critique for my child (august)

I enjoy your artstyle and i see no actual need to progress farther, however my only minor gripes is this

- the neck seems stiff and in 3/4th angles they sometimes look off centered because of the lack of back muscle, adding this muscle may make your drawings look more relaxed (stiffness is fine! but it should be used to add onto context of art)

- sometimes you draw your faces really small but your angles for most of your art is fantastic, but sometimes the body is just.... flat(facing the viewer) while their faces seem to always face down...? easy fix these angles are great for dynamic art but static pieces should be fairly flat-facing

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  ☆ beanz

luka 🍉

YAY TY KING I feel like i focus way too much on how I draw characters' faces and making everything look all cutesy and stylized to the point that I don't really give much thought to actual anatomy and how I draw bodies as much when I'm drawing help 😣 but yes thank you for the words of wisdom mister luka! I will take them with me to my grave.

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  luka 🍉

luka 🍉

also ik you worry about face symmetry but it's fine, you're doing 3/4ths so they shouldn't be... symmetrical unless im missing something,

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  luka 🍉

luka 🍉

Circles are fine but in the long run it's not recommended because it can decrease ur understanding on how connecting joins work, ball jointed dolls are great but there can always be more than that, and a circle sketch can prove faulty in certain cases

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  luka 🍉

☆ beanz

There's not much to say, i enjoy your style, you have a great grasp in colors and prospective work, but my.. two biggest gripes is that, you know.... symmetrical lines, but mostly with shoulders (they're fairly symmetrical but sometimes you make one shorter than the other and it throws me off), and in your rabbit hole processs i saw how u draw the pose i do not recommend sketching poses out like that at all, i do not recommend circles for sketching the most i'd use a circle for is the head nothing else, shoulders are not circles, it's more constructive to use boxes

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  luka 🍉

☆ beanz

im going to fly out just to hang myself /j yea i can do that

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