Here are some things I think you can improve on

Make the story more clear- it helps the viewers to know what you are doing

Don’t rush the frames- it helps better to understand how you are gonna do the episode of you want more story or want a goofy look

Being good at drawing isn’t always gonna be placed- I’m not good at drawing but I like making my object show too and idc what those others think

I think that is most of it all I have to say