Okay- uhh... I'm going to stop once I reach this comment. Anything past this comment of mine, I will not rate, because I'm going to do animations and other things that I really want to do.
I like the foreshortening a lot!
The drawing is definitely a little messy, but there are a lot of good and fun elements in it, such as the pose, the foreshortening, the flow and movement- just cause it doesn't have crisp lineart doesn't make it bad at all
Lilith: OW! (she covers her ears)
Sylph: Haha, good thing I can't really feel pain :D
*Leo peeks around the corner of the entrance to the living room and stares at them silently*