again, amazing pieces of art but unless this is purely your style, you lack senses of prospective
i saw on one post you mentioning about a "blank background" and i get it backgrounds are scary, i hate them too but the easiest way is to learn prospective

it's also easier to draw the background first, and then add characters later for a more natural flow (but there is a charm in your art breaking rules of prospective)

+ the left arm seems to bend too backward, yet looks still..... either it is back or it isnt, elbow/forearm muscle should be defined

u have an amazing skill for shading but for this one the neck muscles are not in the right places, because this is a fem character i will ignore adam's apple but there is still a connective muscle that runs down from your neck to the center of your collar bone, you do amazing detailing but i feel like the grasp on shading might be everywhere without understanding how muscles work

a lot of it might be comment based like i did with august bear with me

honestly i'd recommend studying fundamentals like anatomy before trying to figure out masculinity/femininity... i used to struggle a lot drawing men when I was younger until I genuinely learned the basics of anatomy

this is gonna be difficult corn.

minor gripe because i'm a anatomy nerd but for characters with wings (unless stated throughly in lore that their wings are nonfunctional) functional wings are should be way larger

ear should fall at least half way

The skull is a little wonky... i drew from memory but it's more... compressed?

* example of great face angle, but it doesn't really fit the body... unless the character is meant to look gloomy

* saw this, forgot to add that the skull is *not* a circle, i can post a skull tut soon

* for reference this is a great example of the back muscle/trapezius in your style

"i-it must be hard livi-" I'll hang myself in front of your house so my ghost will haunt you

"T-this disorder involves xyz and the people w-who suffer from it should have love and support!" yeah you all say that until i become delusional and you all suddenly think i'm unfixable and that i'm a danger to society and that i need to be locked up

It's also generally frusterating when people advocate for mental health and yet actively push the ones they do not like or understand away, people when they say "i want a mentally ill bf" or say "i can handle a mentally ill person" and i show up and i am now deemed difficult to handle. i hate it, and it's one of the biggest factors why I have self-isolated myself from everyone near me because my struggles are not something they can understand

Everyone has refused to believe in my mental struggles and it feels frustrating how much of myself could've been managed if anyone even *considered* that I was infact, ill, and treated me like an ill person

I still hate how much of my health has been invalidated by people around me just because they do not believe my situation, because I grew up with a "free enviroment" to them and yet my mental health has spiraled extremely since elementary

talking about my health and disorders is so refreshing and freeing and yet i feel so restricted because there will be people who think i'm faking this but it's because for the longest time i hated being vulnerable (and i still do) and refused to talk about my issues because it made me feel weak, acknowledging i have issues that do affect my health makes me feel like i'm progressing even if it's by a little bit

if it's a stomach bug it's a 3 year long one apparently

in 2022 i think my doctor told me that? that i finally made it past the "underweight" mark