*he flicked his tail in acknowledgment and started to sniff around. He could hear a mouse under some roots. He slowly got in to his best crouch and started towards it. He hoped at it quickly and barely missed it. His paws must have been to heavy. He hissed in annoyance*

(Alr all good. Also sorry for late reply)
*Echocloud's tail twitched with amusement. She responded in a quiet voice,* "Go on then, show me what you got. I'll monitor from here."

(I’m Chang my format)

*MathPaw stoped and sat down. His tail twitched softly as he sniffed* shhh be quiet your big paws are going to scare all my pray away.

*Echocloud followed as Mothpaw lead through the forest. She looked back up through the trees to check the time of day. She determined that they still had some time to practice before the sun sets. Not long after, Mothpaw arrived at the spot he suggested, with Echocloud not far behind.*

MothPaws tail flicked with joy of the parasail. He turned and padded off.