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yeah most people think that TT but for someone to have actual wings, think of paragliding lolol but i can understand wanting to fit into a canvas
* my only noticable critique is the skull, but I already posted a post about skull shapes.... i think i'm done critiquing but overall your art has the charm of chaos, which can render my critique useless
+ referencing critique i mentioned earlier but this is a great example of your work that inclues prospective
only issue is collar bone lines up with shoulders, if its top view down then collar bones look like \/, bottom view up collarbones will look like /\
oh and because i'm assuming ur persona is looking down, the ears should be tilted downward to the eyes line up above the ears, one of the easiest ways to trick people into thinking you know prospective
again, amazing pieces of art but unless this is purely your style, you lack senses of prospective
i saw on one post you mentioning about a "blank background" and i get it backgrounds are scary, i hate them too but the easiest way is to learn prospective
it's also easier to draw the background first, and then add characters later for a more natural flow (but there is a charm in your art breaking rules of prospective)
+ the left arm seems to bend too backward, yet looks still..... either it is back or it isnt, elbow/forearm muscle should be defined
u have an amazing skill for shading but for this one the neck muscles are not in the right places, because this is a fem character i will ignore adam's apple but there is still a connective muscle that runs down from your neck to the center of your collar bone, you do amazing detailing but i feel like the grasp on shading might be everywhere without understanding how muscles work
honestly i'd recommend studying fundamentals like anatomy before trying to figure out masculinity/femininity... i used to struggle a lot drawing men when I was younger until I genuinely learned the basics of anatomy
minor gripe because i'm a anatomy nerd but for characters with wings (unless stated throughly in lore that their wings are nonfunctional) functional wings are should be way larger
The skull is a little wonky... i drew from memory but it's more... compressed?
* example of great face angle, but it doesn't really fit the body... unless the character is meant to look gloomy
* saw this, forgot to add that the skull is *not* a circle, i can post a skull tut soon
* for reference this is a great example of the back muscle/trapezius in your style
"i-it must be hard livi-" I'll hang myself in front of your house so my ghost will haunt you
"T-this disorder involves xyz and the people w-who suffer from it should have love and support!" yeah you all say that until i become delusional and you all suddenly think i'm unfixable and that i'm a danger to society and that i need to be locked up
It's also generally frusterating when people advocate for mental health and yet actively push the ones they do not like or understand away, people when they say "i want a mentally ill bf" or say "i can handle a mentally ill person" and i show up and i am now deemed difficult to handle. i hate it, and it's one of the biggest factors why I have self-isolated myself from everyone near me because my struggles are not something they can understand
Everyone has refused to believe in my mental struggles and it feels frustrating how much of myself could've been managed if anyone even *considered* that I was infact, ill, and treated me like an ill person