Okay I saw that. Cool i guess. But two bloody decades and those skills... :-[
I just suggest that looking at some shading tips would help a better, and the water thing effects are distracting from the character that should be dragging the attention. Also toggling with ‘add’ layer with hair lighting at some point will improve the atmosphere.
https://youtu.be/8EwNKmMnB2Y
This video might help with your at industry even just a little. Have fun ig :-//