Constructive criticism pls!!
Your hair floats and you have no hair line and there that thing floating it's all unrealistic and with the drawing it's actually pretty good just the lines in the neck shading are going on the lining a wee bit but over all 9.3/10
Zane-amations
The thing about all the hair connecting is actually really helpful ty:D (The thing floating is called an ahoge and most ppl use theml
